Thanksgiving is when you really hit
your stride Uncle. Ohh! I can already taste that chocolate fudge.
And the turkey is so moist it dissolves in your mouth. Did your wife
teach you how to cook like this or was it Nana? If they are the King
Arthur of the kitchen kingdom, you are certainly Merlin. The magic
you put into the food is something to behold. And then quickly after
beholding, eating. And then quickly after eating, watching football
with the family; holding our bloated stomachs hoping they don't
burst. I can't wait.
Your wrinkled face shows no signs of
aging. You would think a trial like the one you faced in the second
World War might have worn you to the bone. But no. In the past, you
never did talk much about the war. Like a secret sealed chest, you
kept it closed, afraid that like Pandora, it would somehow get out.
But lately, I've heard that chest creaking open, breaking its rusted
locks to reveal wondrous treasures within its tattered facade.
Grampa, you're as sharp as a tack that has been filed down on a whetstone
wheel. I've got an ear, waiting, if you ever want to share those
tales with the world.
Chris, where did we loose each other?
Was it right after high school when we both went our separate ways?
I know you as well as anyone. We were best friends. I hope we still
are. You always tried to fit in, not realizing our friends and I
didn't care about that. I remember planning to start a business
together. The plans we made and the dreams we dreamed were as good
as done. Yet now, you are as far off as an untethered ship, loosed
in the night by the rocking waves. I feel as if I should, sort of,
climb into a boat, sail out and bring you back to the safety of the
harbor. Back to shore where we dreamed about today and called it the
future.
This prompt does sort of lead to poetic grafs, doesn't it? You handle the material gracefully, no wasted effort, no failed effects--you get the reactions from your reader you intend. The first one appeals to me the most because it's the most visual, the easiest for me to insert my imagination into, but they each do work in that poetic way.
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