I walk out of my apartment and cross
the street to retrieve the mail. Pulling the mail from the box I
sift through looking for anything but junk. Down the street I hear
children laughing and playing. I stop for a moment and take it all
in. The leaves are still green but the air has a chill that only
comes after Labor Day. A big wheel rolls into the empty street.
Then another. Chasing each other across the street and then onto the
lawn, their imaginations have them on a dirt track in front of
thousands, ripping and tearing towards the finish line. They ride across the grass, chased by their little friends.
A cat saunters around home up the
street. She sees me out of the corner of her eye and stops. She
slowly makes her way to me but keeps her distance. She has no collar
and appears unkempt. I bend down and slide my hand forward. She
remains suspicious and stays put. I make a few “cht cht cht”
sounds to help entice her to make a new friend. She stares and then
turns, walking away.
The street is quiet as it always is
(save for the laughter of the kids). The wind quietly shifts the
trees as the sound of a mower can be heard afar off. I make my way
back to the house. A car swings around the corner and drives down
the street. They give a small wave of the hand and turning into
their driveway. I walk back indoors, leaving the door ajar so to
hear the wind in the trees.
Nice mood piece--you have the trick here of being descriptive in a way that does not bore; putting yourself in, putting the cat in help a lot. As does the indeterminate close and your willingness to let the moment and the scene hang there and not crash them down to earth with 'explanations.'
ReplyDeleteWorks for me!